I've been working on this for a while. In order to make sure that my permission request shows off as much of my writing skill as possible. I would like a beta who can, in particular, point out any problems with flow, plot consistency, and characterization. Those are definitely my weaker areas.

The Google Document is about 5¼ pages long and there are 1689 words. You don't need any knowledge of any continua (because none appear or are mentioned).

That should be everything you need to know. If it's not, just ask me a question.