Whelp, I finally got my Permission request done, so I now need some Betas.

The doc is about 2,300 words long. I would like general SPaG betas as well as those who can help with flow and other things. For the SPaG, comma knowledge would be really appreciated. There are some mentions of PPC canon objects and locations, but no major PPC knowledge is needed.

I prefer to send the doc link over Discord PM (if that's possible) although I'll email it if need be.

If you are emailing or PM-ing your critique, please put it in list form if possible.

If you need any other info, just reply and I will happily respond ASAP.

(Note: I still require at least one more Beta.)