And wow, this is like a dream come true(minus the cataclysmic event of World One disappearing). I've always been into trans-dimensional/military crossover stuff and the story itself is fun to read.

Okay, so I have yet to read from the beginning (mostly I've just been going "ooh" whenever a new chapter is put up because I think the concept is interesting and it's nice to see that this story of yours keeps growing), but on a whim I clicked, and I have to say, even without much context/half-remembered PPC context, I really liked the first scene. There are quite a few good lines ("calm down. You're capslocking" was one), and the repeated references to PPC/HQ specific weirdness were a welcome surprise. The writing itself is good, too!

All in all, I really am going to have to go back and read the entire story someday (though I might wait until it's finished? We'll see. Either way, right now I'm deep into work+writing+reading fic in 1-2 main fandoms, so that's all the more reason to wait a little longer for a time when I can give it proper attention, ie read most or all of it in one sitting/over a few consecutive days). More and more, I get the feeling it'll be very interesting.

Well done, and keep going! :) It really is always very nice to see your story keep growing. I know you (all) put a lot of work into it.

~Z