Subject: This was cute. {= ) (nm)
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Posted on: 2021-11-01 18:03:12 UTC
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What’s this, an actual piece of PPC writing? by
on 2021-10-30 17:58:31 UTC
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I know, I’m shocked at myself too. Meet my other PPC agent pair, Zara and Diamond, and Zara’s lovely pets.
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That was nice! (nm) by
on 2021-11-23 14:23:15 UTC
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re: interlude by
on 2021-11-04 14:29:39 UTC
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Cute! I like that Zara is so caring and motherly to scary-looking animals. Lucky for her that her RC has a bathroom big enough for a bear and a fell beast to fit in!
I guess the one thing I would criticize here is that Coco's vocals and Bella's normal animal noises are spelled out as words in quotations, the same as Bella's actual human dialogue. Kind of tricked me into thinking Bella was speaking "Whuff" (etc.) as a word, rather than making a cute whuffing noise. Makes it a little unclear?
—doctorlit might actually need to watch Annihilation, it looks fascinating
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This was cute. {= ) (nm) by
on 2021-11-01 18:03:12 UTC
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Nice interlude by
on 2021-10-30 23:55:01 UTC
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I love the interplay between Zara and Diamond. It really gives a good sense of how they get along with each other or not. And Zara's pets are interesting.