I'm getting the third version of my permission slip out of the draft phase and I'm looking for betas to ensure it's up to standard.

People with an especially sharp eye towards abuse of the comma would be appreciated - it's a bad habit of mine to put them where they shouldn't be.

Be as harsh as possible when critiquing, I want to ensure this is a quality work.

For the link please contact me on the Discord, I am under the nickname Sierpinski there.