Subject: re: interlude part 2
Posted on: 2022-05-09 13:47:28 UTC

Thalia's narration continues to be a delight! It does feel like it has a bit less energy behind it than in part one, like she's a little more focused on what's happening now, but that also makes sense, since she's now pleading her case to keep Fred against Doom's more direct refusal. I can understand Doom's frustration about the situation, though it seems Fred wants to play along with staying? So hopefully Fred has the good sense not to perturb Doom too much . . . The question is, how many eggs can the agents get before going broke?

—doctorlit likes eggs, too

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