Subject: Re: Interlude
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Posted on: 2012-08-31 14:57:00 UTC
I really liked this! It has such a normal, daily grind vibe for something that takes place in HQ. It even shows some of the workings of the school systems and DoI procedures.
And Miss MacKinnon appears again! I'm getting more and more glad that I recruited her. :)
One typo: When Angus is talking to the hylian, "The spy woke her up be clearing his throat" rather than by clearing his throat.
You’ve seen him lounging on cubicle 5294’s mini-fridge whenever a certain more-or-less well-known spy goes on a mission.
He likes to have turkey sandwiches (with mustard, not mayonnaise) for lunch, and displays an inordinate fondness for root beer.
He used to be in the All-Purpose Department, Discworld Division a couple of years ago before transferring to Intelligence so that he could spend more time in HQ to care for his only daughter.
Now, witness a perfectly ordinary day in the life of Angus MacFarlane in Another day, another badfic.
I’d like to thank ThatOne and Ponystar17 for beta-reading this piece. You guys rock!
Concrit is welcome, as always.
I rather like these interludes. I think I shall find more of them to read~
Cyba Zero and Eagrus Khan mission 1 can be found here:
http://cyba-zero.livejournal.com/931.html
Hopefully the link works.
Many thanks to Sevenswans for beta-ing.
Concrit welcome!
Loot:
1 soulmat, claimed by Cyba and Eagrus, although it may be loaned to any agents who know the correct magic from the Elder Scrolls continuum to use it as anything other than a doormat.
1 new wraith type, duly delivered to the Department of Mary Sue Experiments and Research, in a jar.
Mini-Colossi (a small army of them):
Mess Efekt (adopted by Cyba)
Joke (adopted by Cyba)
Geths
Gets
Sawvrin
Rapers
Sheperd
Rocks
Urdent Rocks
Andeson
Anersin
Jocker
Joking
Kaddin
Though that is a ton of minis, perhaps you should give it its own thread? :)
No one, I'm sure, envies him the task of sifting through all the fiction. Hope he finds his root beer.
I really liked this! It has such a normal, daily grind vibe for something that takes place in HQ. It even shows some of the workings of the school systems and DoI procedures.
And Miss MacKinnon appears again! I'm getting more and more glad that I recruited her. :)
One typo: When Angus is talking to the hylian, "The spy woke her up be clearing his throat" rather than by clearing his throat.
Typo fixed. I'm glad you liked it!