Subject: I kinda understood it?
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Posted on: 2022-11-04 18:31:16 UTC

So, as I have said elsewhere, I’ve not seen One Piece. Still haven’t.

Your fic was, SPaG-wise, sound, at least aside from the random ~’s before exclamation marks. The story was interesting, understandable, even without knowing characterization beforehand. Not sure about the licensed costumes, though. Would they exist in this universe?

—Ls