Subject: I kinda understood it?
Posted on: 2022-11-04 18:31:16 UTC

So, as I have said elsewhere, I’ve not seen One Piece. Still haven’t.

Your fic was, SPaG-wise, sound, at least aside from the random ~’s before exclamation marks. The story was interesting, understandable, even without knowing characterization beforehand. Not sure about the licensed costumes, though. Would they exist in this universe?

If you’re desperate for attention, though, I suggest you interact more on the Board, beyond just badfics and One Piece.


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