I kinda understood it?

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Subject: I kinda understood it?
Author: Linstar
Posted on: 2022-11-04 18:31:16 UTC

So, as I have said elsewhere, I’ve not seen One Piece. Still haven’t.

Your fic was, SPaG-wise, sound, at least aside from the random ~’s before exclamation marks. The story was interesting, understandable, even without knowing characterization beforehand. Not sure about the licensed costumes, though. Would they exist in this universe?

If you’re desperate for attention, though, I suggest you interact more on the Board, beyond just badfics and One Piece.

—Ls

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Belated Halloween fic plug by AstralCat on 2022-11-04 02:23:20 UTC Writing Plug Reply

Okay, it's November, so I'm a bit late, but I just wanted you guys to see my Halloween fic A Spooky Halloween with the Mugiwaras. I know some of you have not read One Piece before, but I promise it'll be a fun read. Also, once you're done reading, I just wanna ask: what was your favorite part?

-AstralCat, desperate for attention like she always is

I kinda understood it? by Linstar on 2022-11-04 18:31:16 UTC Edited Reply

So, as I have said elsewhere, I’ve not seen One Piece. Still haven’t.

Your fic was, SPaG-wise, sound, at least aside from the random ~’s before exclamation marks. The story was interesting, understandable, even without knowing characterization beforehand. Not sure about the licensed costumes, though. Would they exist in this universe?

If you’re desperate for attention, though, I suggest you interact more on the Board, beyond just badfics and One Piece.

—Ls

To answer your question, it's basically a modern AU with fantastical elements, so they do exist. (nm) by AstralCat on 2022-11-05 19:21:56 UTC Reply