Subject: re: interlude
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Posted on: 2022-12-25 18:09:34 UTC

A cute little story! I like the subversion at the end, with Meg siding with the humans instead of Diamond. It's nice she wants, on some level, to support her partner! I think I'm more on Diamond's side, myself . . .

One nitpick: "Mini-balrog" normally has a hyphen in the middle.

—doctorlit reads the Christmas interlude on Christmas

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