I find romance stuff difficult to comment on, since I don't really understand it, but I actually enjoyed this quite a bit. I can't really pinpoint why, but there's just a vibe throughout that's really sweet and personable? I also like that Diamond acted so concerned about and supportive of Zara, even though Diamond was in love with her, and thought Zara was seeking someone else. Just very nice!

I also listened to "Diamant." Not the energy I'm used to hearing from Rammstein, but it's still a nice song!

—doctorlit, commenting on two romantic interludes this morning

It's fine for agents to think fondly of people sometimes and to get a little cheesy about it :P The console interrupting, though, was the perfect touch to bring them back to reality!

Short, but sweet. I like little character moments, and this was a nice one to read.

I second the comment on the melodrama. The story is hilarious, but it's also sweet. Well, until the console interrupted, but that's practically a given in the PPC.

The overwrought melodramatic narration is the most spot-on parody I've seen in a while.