re: mission by
doctorlit
on 2023-03-09 03:20:28 UTC
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Heh! I love Urato's plan, and especially the ominous looming scene that initiates it! I can't wait to see Inasuke's attempts at training him. Kind of thought we would see some training during this mission, but the charging scene came so abruptly. I know the grammar was poor, but Alice and her sister really hadn't done much of anything yet; I feel like there should have been a bit more this time. Well, I'm still looking forward to Urato's new hobby in the stories to come!
—doctorlit puts no value on private clubs, himself
Read. It was good. by
Linstar
on 2023-03-08 00:54:50 UTC
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Wow, was that badfic is weird. It looks like it's a trollfic.
-Ls