Subject: Thanks, and re: that Alice and her sister haven't done much before being exorcised
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Posted on: 2023-03-09 03:38:28 UTC
It's because each chapter of the fic is ludicrously short, and there's no point in waiting until the next chapter. They haven't done much because they aren't given any time to do much. The next chapter is also set in the DC Comics fandom, which I'm not in.
After catching wind of Kaguya's failure, Urato has an idea – and surprise awaits in this new mission into Pixie Hollow.
Heh! I love Urato's plan, and especially the ominous looming scene that initiates it! I can't wait to see Inasuke's attempts at training him. Kind of thought we would see some training during this mission, but the charging scene came so abruptly. I know the grammar was poor, but Alice and her sister really hadn't done much of anything yet; I feel like there should have been a bit more this time. Well, I'm still looking forward to Urato's new hobby in the stories to come!
—doctorlit puts no value on private clubs, himself
It's because each chapter of the fic is ludicrously short, and there's no point in waiting until the next chapter. They haven't done much because they aren't given any time to do much. The next chapter is also set in the DC Comics fandom, which I'm not in. The actual genleman training would begin next episode, when they find a "proper" badfic.
Wow, was that badfic is weird. It looks like it's a trollfic.
-Ls
If anything, the second chapter has even less to do with Tinker Bell.