Oh my, I know relatively little about Batman and even I know that all that was wrong...

The fact that there are good luck charlies wandering around makes me feel like there is a force within the words that uses us to smite badfic. I have no idea how I would go about drawing one, though.

It's a very fun read, and I also like the Bat-Mite.

I absolutely loved the Bat-Mite. And it was great how you used him and the Good Luck Charlies. Virtibird was great as well; I like a mini with a personality.

If I might add a bit of concrit, I felt that the 'Why do you hate me?' bit, while being wellwritten, could have been resovled sooner.
After all, saying 'I was trying to provoke the Ironic Owerpower into sending you here' doesn't take longer to say than 'I didn't mean it and it's your problem if you think I did', so it was odd that Sylvia waited for so long to make the full explanation.

Other than that, I really liked the interaction between your agents.

And the moomoos were pure comedy gold!

My knowledge of Batman is limited to the first two movies (I still haven't been able to see the third one yet, much to my annoyance), but I still enjoyed this mission a lot, especially the “James Gordon: Commissioner/Badass” bit. And Nygma was both adorable and hilarious. Just one bit of concrit: the switching of the type back and forth from bold to normal is a bit distracting. In missions like this you can just quote the fic directly.

Since I've seen the initial version of this fic, let me congratulate on how much it improved. You managed to streamline boring situations, and the climax was very, err, climactic.

Nygma was definitely one of the highlights of this mission. You don't see that sort of mini involvement that often.

Also, I like how the agents don't merely stand next to the situation. They hide, they are dragged into the first person POV, they face their fears (nice foreshadowing there, by the way).