Subject: Sorry for the late reply.
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Posted on: 2012-08-22 06:59:00 UTC
May I have an email address, please?
Don't worry: I'm looking for feedback on story flow and coherence. Pointing out passages you think are rather confusing or poorly written will help me a great deal.
Presenting a look into a completely normal morning in the life of Angus MacFarlane as he works for the Department of Intelligence. This is a slice-of-life fic set in Headquarters, so no special continuum knowledge is needed.
The fic clocks in at roughly 3000 words.
Please reply to this thread if you're interested!
I have some experience beta-ing but none for PPC stories. However I've read all (or almost all, you can never be sure) of the Intelligence reports, and I have a pretty good eye for spotting grammer mistakes. My email is beeg97@yahoo.com but I'm going away in a couple days, so I might not respond immediatly if you do email me.
...your misspelling of "grammar". Just make sure you catch things like that next time, eh?
I've sent you a link to the story.
I would be happy to beta this. Be warned, though, I haven't had much experience as a beta, so I might not catch everything.
May I have an email address, please?
Don't worry: I'm looking for feedback on story flow and coherence. Pointing out passages you think are rather confusing or poorly written will help me a great deal.
My eMail address is pipparosemorris@aol.com. I assume I'm co-betaing with ThatOne? If so, sounds good. Anyway, again, sorry for the late reply, I was getting an error trying to access the Board.