Subject: Wattpad badfic with some potential.
Posted on: 2024-04-24 14:58:51 UTC

This badfic (which I've been riffing on the Asylum, has one of the worst character profiles I've ever seen. Despite this, I almost like the Sue, the author has potential but keeps messing it up!


EDIT: Somehow, most characters are pretty in-character, and Kali is fairly likable. However, the plot regurgitation and consistent SPaG errors make the occasional bizarre plot choice just that much more intolerable.

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