Does Ivan twirl his moustache?

Also, It's going to be interesting to see what continuums can handle an enormous intelligent tank.

They're certainly not run-of-the-line Agents, and I see a lot of potential for humour. I look forwards to seeing more of what you write.

Sounds like a great thing to have around HQ - and fortunately I think most of my remaining agents are human. Out of interest, what would her programming dictate if, say, an Elven agent tried to assassinate a human Sue in front of her? On the one hand you've got the 'this is a Mary-Sue, she hurts other humans by warping them', but on the other hand you've got 'this is a non-human attacking a human in front of me'.

As to Ivan... he sounds like an interesting ground to work from. Not much to him so far (in this summary, at least), but that's okay, characters can be built on the go. I do wonder about his perceptiveness, though -- he seriously thinks the Flowers are skilled leaders? Something seriously wrong there. :P

hS

Unfortunately, supertanks are fairly limited as to the continuums in which they can operate undisguised... Looking forward to that one!

If you need another limiting factor, you could always say that an undisguised Bolo is too much for a continuum to accept - dropping her disguise gets Susan forcibly ejected into the Void.

. . . Susan's particular protection for humans. We've frequently seen an agent of a non-human species have a particular inclination for keeping them safe from badfics, but I think this is the first time I've seen one focus on humans.

And there are a lot of humans out in the multiverse! I hope Susan doesn't blow a gasket (or whatever she's made of) from all the badfic stuff she'll see happening to them!

'...tendency to speak like a stereotypical archvillian, complete with maniacal laughter' - sounds amusing, I'll look forward to this one!