Subject: re: interlude
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Posted on: 2024-11-09 12:21:41 UTC
I’m not really one to read or comment on romance stories, but I do appreciate that this story shows how Momoka has largely shed her self-imposed role as the “family servant,” and consciously sees herself as Kaguya’s equal now. I’m glad things turned out this way!
—doctorlit, exchanging soft touches and warm breaths with a bowl of pasta
It's literally just 'Guya and Momo hugging. Warning though that this little short piece is extremely sappy (as evident in the title).
I have a few more backstory ideas for Kaguya, given his background, but I'm hesitant to write them because I'm afraid I'd be unfairly favoring him. What do you think?
You don’t have to give all your characters perfectly balanced attention. If you feel like you have more to write about Kaguya, then write it!
—doctorlit
'Guya and his parents actually hang out at a high-society event.
I’m not really one to read or comment on romance stories, but I do appreciate that this story shows how Momoka has largely shed her self-imposed role as the “family servant,” and consciously sees herself as Kaguya’s equal now. I’m glad things turned out this way!
—doctorlit, exchanging soft touches and warm breaths with a bowl of pasta
Actually, she still calls 'Guya "my liege" at the end 😂