Subject: Neat.
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Posted on: 2012-07-29 15:37:00 UTC
I have to say, I like it. There were lots of funny scenes and you two definitely know how to write action scenes.
Also...
“Hey! I’m here as a spare!” Under shouted,
Apologies for the delay in posting--real life interfered, as it often does. But Neshomeh and I are now pleased to announce that before Round Two, there was Round One . . . although it's not a prequel, because that word carries terrifying implications these days. Instead, let's call it the Opening Event.
Here it is! Round One, Match One: Team Physical Therapy (written by Neshomeh) versus Team Blast Hardcheese (written by Tungsten_Monk). Let the mayhem begin!
I have to say, I like it. There were lots of funny scenes and you two definitely know how to write action scenes.
Also...
“Hey! I’m here as a spare!” Under shouted,
Most excellent! I especially like the contrast shown between the two teams; FicPsych's tight-knit group against the bunch of people who met in a bar. :p Both had some real personality going, which makes it even funnier that members of Physical Therapy's group kept getting into individual fistfights with the Hardcheesers.
I do hope the members of BH get a little more into playing as the season goes on. Right now, most of them are too busy acting tough to be having any fun!
Poor Aragorn! At least he got to taste Gatorade for once, even if he won't remember it.
Unger's name got misspelled "Under" at one point. He may be short, but I don't think he would find it very appropriate!