Ok, let's take a deep breath and cross our fingers, shall we?

Here is my second post for Permission on the board. I put a good deal of time into this and have gotten pretty invested in it, so, while it is unlikely that it will be accepted, I really need some concrit to point me in the right direction if this is badly done. Well, what can I say but read carefully and don’t be afraid to post your most scathing replies; I learn best from such comments.

I request that they join the Department of Floaters, due to the fact that both the characters, who are both newbies, and myself, don’t know what their talents are for sporking.
The badfic I wish to start off with is http://www.fanfiction.net/s/8235051/1/HighSchooldoseitever_end

Agent Seanoic- A less stu-ish than average stu, he was found in a Fire Emblem badfic. He was recruited to the PPC because of a sympathetic agent, who had also been a Stu in his own right. Male, relatively tall, with brown hair and sideburns, and is stronger than normal. He tends to not like fighting, as his above-par strength could give away the fact that he used to be a Stu, which is probably his greatest fear. Apart from mimes, of course. When he fights, he uses a bow.

Agent Reid- She is decidedly less sympathetic towards Sues and Stu’s than her new partner. She hails from World 1, but tends not to talk much about her past. She was asked why, and responded with a simple, “Who would care? My past is pretty much as normal as the next guy”. Female of normal height with black hair and average strength. She tends to use a sword in combat.