Subject: Dun-dun-duuh!
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Posted on: 2012-07-22 19:47:00 UTC
Nice cliffhanger at the end!
I like how Saline got to use her background and personality. It's always exciting to see agents solve a mission in a way that other agents couldn't have used. I try to do so in my own missions.
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Ah well, Saline and Priyala have a new mission. As always, concrit, on the story as well as on the page, is welcome. Errors will be collected and updated after a while. Thanks to my betas for putting up with me.
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Midguard and Asguard the mini Nick Furys. These are common misspellings, so I'm not sure if they're already taken.
PS: I'll be without internet for a week, but you guys keep posting, I'll read it after I return.
I appreciate the faking out of Loki at the end, as well. Yay for villainous characters. :D
~Puck
Nice cliffhanger at the end!
I like how Saline got to use her background and personality. It's always exciting to see agents solve a mission in a way that other agents couldn't have used. I try to do so in my own missions.
Oh, sweet Sharess.
One: Loki is a shapeshifter. He gets around fine in mortal clothes in Thor. Also, he is an illusion-er, so contacts and suchlike are unnecessary. Three: PEPPER POTTS. SHE EXISTS. Four: The only way she could be half frost giant and make it make any sort of sense is if she was Lokispawn, and that's assuming the canon version fathered Sleipnir and the rest of his children. Five: Why in the name of Madoka's Puella Magi Heaven was Loki moping in ASGARD?!?!
Sorry, I just... needed to do that. This was a great mission, and pretty funny. I do think you missed a few charges (Pepper and Loki being in Asgard) but it was still good. By the way, can I have Asguard? I kinda imagine that mini-Fury wearing widdle Viking armor.
Also... Pepper and Loki in Asgard? Wait. What. Pepper wasn't even mentioned. And I do think that Loki was taken back to Asgard at the end of the movie. I doubt that he'd be whining in his bed, though.
And thank you very much for implying that they, by all means, should be related. Thank you.
That thing about Pepper is supposed to mean that SHE is Tony's girlfriend, since--well, most of the movie canon. This Mabry chick is usurping her, and that's why the fact she wasn't mentioned ticks me off so much, not that she wasn't in Asgard.
Also, shouldn't Loki be in some kind of, you know, cell for all his attempted-genocide-and-mass-murder? At least he shouldn't be able to teleport, if he's not in a dungeon or anything.
And I don't think he teleported himself. Otherwise he wouldn't end up in some random girl's kitchen... still, the fact that he can get out. Even if it's by the means of intervention from outside. Hell, in the fic it sounds like that's just, like, his room. And he's sulking in it like a teenager.
About Mabry, I chose not to really do anything about that since she's just mentioned once and it would have just been chunky to have to deal with that too. As said, I don't get the whole thing with ignoring Pepper. Maybe it has to do with another fic by the same author.
Seems like I just got the stuff up before these issues started. I can't access anything either.
Fancy some tea while we wait?