Subject: Target Acquired!
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Posted on: 2012-05-28 23:16:00 UTC

So i'm a new member to PPC, and i'd really like to get permission for a story.
But that's another thread.
Anyways, I was browsing on FF.Net and found this monstrosity.
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7630656/1/doyouremember
It's a Bleach/Inuyasha crossover.
(/i) OH MY GOD. (\i)
The grammar... rrrrgh!
Not to mention the spelling. Here, read this gem:
'"YOU FOUND SOMEONE WITH SO MUCH AURA!"yelled hatseguya.

"maaannn….calm down, what about it?"said ichigo while scatching his everyone was stunned from captain h actions.'what did he know?''

As bad as the spelling is, it gets worse.
1) It's not Hatseguya. His name is spelled Hitsugaya.
2)"ichogo while scratching his everyone"? How do you scratch your everyone?
3) Never abbreviate names while writing fanfic. Never say something like "captain h" onless you're talking about Mr. T.

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