Re: My Sue Detector's bleeping!

My Sue Detector's bleeping! by Benedicta on 2012-05-28 11:01:00 UTC Reply

I have a bad feeling about this fanfic. When I read the OC's data, she has a color-changing hair and her midichlorian count's roughly 26.500! Creepy...

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/6726650/1/JediOrdersDark_Warrior

I think I need to go through this fanfic for a while.

Re: My Sue Detector's bleeping! by Crimson Flight on 2012-05-28 12:56:00 UTC Reply

Well ladies and gentlemen, please make way for our new Chosen One, who, despite having the codename of Revan, seems to be unrelated to him (Canonically male) in any shape or form other than using the Force.

Anakin has over 20000 midichlorians, and he's the result of Sidious' master attempting to experiment with them, and the experiment backfiring with them creating Anakin.

I wonder what this OC's origins are then.

Re: My Sue Detector's bleeping! by Benedicta on 2012-05-28 13:03:00 UTC Reply

I'm on to reading chapter 2, which seems even more confusing that the Sue's calling Aayla 'Angel'. It seems there's an unexplained past here, and it would obviously contradict Aayla's established canon past.

Another's Sue is up. This time, it's creation of an Obi-Wan fangirl: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7626003/1/ObiwanmyOneand_Only

Re: My Sue Detector's bleeping! by Crimson Flight on 2012-05-28 13:09:00 UTC Reply

Saw that before, in the badfic thread. Very confusing.

By the way, shouldn't you have placed this in the badfic thread?

Re: My Sue Detector's bleeping! by Benedicta on 2012-05-28 13:12:00 UTC Reply

Oh! I forgot I've reported this one before. I wasn't sure whether it's a badfic or not, since I was only skimming through the first parts. Now, I'm ensured it's a badfic.