Subject: What the hay, I'm in.
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Posted on: 2012-05-22 23:42:00 UTC
Free fanart? Yes, please! You can take your pick of my PPC characters, I'm not choosy. If you need suggestions or details, though, I'm happy to give them. Also, references for some can be found in my dA account, and there are descriptions on their wiki pages.
Also, concrit! As someone who also draws stuff (or used to, or needs to start again, or something), I figure feedback is always good:
It's unfortunate that the scan isn't very good, but it's apparent that you've got really clean lines and a grasp of three-dimensionality, which is awesome.
I'm not at all sure how that shirt works, though. It seems to be somehow molded to her chest, which it can't do to that extent if it's made of fabric, and that's a really awkward location for pockets (if they are pockets?)—generally speaking, the top of breast pockets on shirts goes higher up than your actual female breast-level.
Speaking of which, her chest is impossibly large for her frame and not quite hooked up properly. Breasts don't really extend above the armpit (they stretch downward as they get larger, never upward), and the outside lines in particular make them look like they're attached to her collarbones. In any case, the size of them would throw off her balance and make it impossible for her to walk properly, let alone anything more complicated. Big is one thing, but I'm thinking those are about the size of a gallon of milk each, and that's way, way off the chart. I speculate that this is possibly putting people off from getting involved in this thread. (I'm not too concerned about my characters, since most of my main ones are dudes and one is a blue centaur alien.)
The arms are also kinda short for your standard humanoid, though I'm willing to overlook that since they're clearly not human arms, what with the claws and all. Rule of thumb for humans, though, is that the fingertips should extend to about the middle of the thigh when outstretched.
~Neshomeh