Another bad, another good.

Subject: Another bad, another good.
Author: Ivan the Not-so-Terrible
Posted on: 2012-05-12 07:20:00 UTC

First the bad:

the legend of the fox in the wolf dragoons
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7010951/1/

Mechwarrior/Battletech (MW/BT) and Naruto
SPaG abuse, Naruto is related to a canon from the games, messing up weapon tonnages, (2 LRM-20s+a Gauss Rifle on a Vulture? As if.) weapon uses, (LRMs fire in flights of 5, not single missiles.) calling the WoB fascists, (They're religious zealots.) and mixing Clan and spheroid names. If I can get a Naruto fan to cowrite with, this'll be my first mission.

The good:

Hunted Tribes:
http://www.tthfanfic.org/Story-20043/Hotpoint+Hunted+Tribes.htm
MW/BT+ nBattlestar Galactica

The fic gives a point of deviance from canon, makes references to canon past the point, explains stuff with the relevant links, and has few SPaG errors. Financing a war is important, damage matters, public opinion is important, the fic keeps everything as realistic as possible for the settings.

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Fic both bad and good by Gandalf the Beige on 2012-05-12 06:13:00 UTC Reply

The badfic first.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/654471/1/Appearance_Deceiving

A female Uruk created in Saruman's (movie-verse) cloning pits against his design and it is not automatically and efficiently destroyed? The stories cloth is poor beside this point, with questionable grammar mistakes in places.

Now the good. A Movie!Thor AU with Loki and the Jotuns

http://norsekink.livejournal.com/3231.html?thread=6203807

(need be 14 to go beyond the point)

It is quite good, exploring Jotunheim deeper and giving a more complete picture to the story of the war and the tenuous "peace" which followed.

Another bad, another good. by Ivan the Not-so-Terrible on 2012-05-12 07:20:00 UTC Reply

First the bad:

the legend of the fox in the wolf dragoons
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7010951/1/

Mechwarrior/Battletech (MW/BT) and Naruto
SPaG abuse, Naruto is related to a canon from the games, messing up weapon tonnages, (2 LRM-20s+a Gauss Rifle on a Vulture? As if.) weapon uses, (LRMs fire in flights of 5, not single missiles.) calling the WoB fascists, (They're religious zealots.) and mixing Clan and spheroid names. If I can get a Naruto fan to cowrite with, this'll be my first mission.

The good:

Hunted Tribes:
http://www.tthfanfic.org/Story-20043/Hotpoint+Hunted+Tribes.htm
MW/BT+ nBattlestar Galactica

The fic gives a point of deviance from canon, makes references to canon past the point, explains stuff with the relevant links, and has few SPaG errors. Financing a war is important, damage matters, public opinion is important, the fic keeps everything as realistic as possible for the settings.