Re: Agent concrit? (ponies)

Yo!

I was thinking about maybe having a pair of pony agents in addition to my main team, but I wanted to get some feedback first. (I was also considering making them free-to-use agents, but I don't know the protocol for that, so I'll just slink back into the woodwork and you can forget I ever brought it up, how's that.)

Daisy Fields

Daisy Fields (Daisy for short) is an Earth Pony with a mellow, cheerful disposition. She enjoys peace and quiet, but the occasional excitement is nice, too. Daisy is the type of filly to sit back and watch the clouds, maybe sipping some a cool drink, but she's also extremely friendly and enjoys relaxing even more when there's a friend around. She almost never gets angry, but she also has a hard time understanding when others get angry or otherwise emotional. Daisy doesn't often express emotion other than the calm happiness that she constantly exudes. Despite her constant laid-back demeanor, Daisy can be extremely stubborn and resiliant under pressure, and isn't afraid of much.

Daisy is a fan of Harry Potter, Black Butler, Fullmetal Alchemist, Doctor Who, and Uglies. Her only Object of Lust is Neville Longbottom.

Daisy has a yellow-and-white mane in a loose ponytail, a pale yellow coat, and her cutie mark is three daisies. Her special talent is gardening.

Sketchpad

Sketchpad is a shy unicorn with a love of all sorts of art-music, writing, painting, you name it. She loves to spend time at museums and galleries, learning about famous artists and composers. Sketchpad is an extremely empathetic and kind pony who often ends up being the mediator for debates. She has the ability to see both sides of an arguement and suggest the perfect compromise. Despite this, Sketchpad hates being in the middle and hates fighting even more. She doesn't particularly enjoy socializing and usually prefers to read a good book or paint a landscape. Surprisingly, Sketchpad enjoys action-packed books and shows, and almost never bothers with slice-of-life or intellectual ones.

Sketchpad is a fan of Young Wizards, Soul Eater, The Hunger Games, Pandora Hearts, and BBC's Sherlock. Her Objects of Lust are Benedict Cumberbatch, Franken Stein, Peeta, and Finnick.

Sketchpad is a dusty blue-gray pony with a darker blue mane and braided tail. Her cutie mark is a paper and pencil, and her special talent is drawing.

Concrit is appreciated... I keep feeling like I missed something here...

Also, I'm not sure if they, well, fit in the PPC. A mellow, constantly calm pony and someone who focuses on compromise and hates fighting?

Not that I'm against ponies in general, or that I believe pony Agents cannot be made to work, but I'm not quite sure if pony Agents can be made to work with this sort of personality. Can you imagine running a Mission with these agents? If not, they may not work for one of the Action Departments. Of course, it's possible you meant them for one of the other departments, in which case you're doing fine.

If you did mean them to act as active members, then maybe this is what they were like before the PPC? Maybe tweak their initial characters a bit and add a spoonful of HQ-brand crazy and this could go somewhere!