A complete trainwreck of a Lucky Star fic.

Subject: A complete trainwreck of a Lucky Star fic.
Author: EK3
Posted on: 2013-06-05 18:06:00 UTC

(NSFW-ish) http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7422180/1/HUNTER-KILLER

It revolves around a cat-on-keyboard-name Stu, the grammar is laughably awful, and it goes on for over 30,000 words.

The only redeeming thing is the protagonist's amusing perverted thoughts once in a while.
(upon accidentally knocking over Miyuki and realizing that he's looking up her skirt): Wait why isnt she up yet?oh yeh she wears a THE F**K DIDNT I BRING A CAMERA.

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A complete trainwreck of a Lucky Star fic. by EK3 on 2013-06-05 18:06:00 UTC

*shakes head* by Bausiren on 2013-06-06 07:23:00 UTC Reply

The quote scared me off. Somebody please kill this.

It gets worse than that. by EK3 on 2013-06-06 13:44:00 UTC Reply

Most of the chapters after that are entirely in bold.

Oof. by SpecstacularSC on 2013-06-06 19:05:00 UTC Reply

I already have trouble with HTML codes as it is without badfic authors doing that kind of thing.

My MST is going to be ridiculous...

Seriously, every MST I do looks like I'm trying to program a supercomputer before I publish it. This is just going to make that fact worse.

I don't know Lucky Star all that well, but... by SpecstacularSC on 2013-06-05 19:11:00 UTC Reply

Judging by the quote at the end, I'll have fun MSTing this regardless.

(Wow, I have a lot of MSTs on my plate now.

Let's see:

Two ongoing for LotR,
Two more to start for LotR,
One for Lucky Star,
One for Lost Odyssey,
One I recently finished for LotR - I think.

Yeah, I think I just packed my whole week.

Ah well! I do it for fun anyhow.)

I'm also rather shocked by the reviews. by SpecstacularSC on 2013-06-05 19:15:00 UTC Reply

Normally, FF.Net isn't so harsh on the stories posted! Wow, this guy must have crossed a pretty big threshold...