Subject: Fun mission!
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Posted on: 2012-04-29 01:28:00 UTC
Yeah, I don't really know MGLN, but from what I read I think I got the gist of it.
Also, I think all the agents together had great chemistry together, which really suited the piece a lot. Crazy times were had with them, especially with Sergio carrying the gun everywhere.
Sergio Turbo and I have recently finished our co-write mission, Legendary Illogic, of a Nanoha and Harry Potter crossover badfic. As always, concrit is welcomed.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/13SU5L1uJbHHa34kepgn8FgiakWcTQUmchzL2wuIu-UI/edit?pli=1
Minis:
Bardiche Duse
Harry Potter POV
Mudungus Fletcher
Yeah, I don't really know MGLN, but from what I read I think I got the gist of it.
Also, I think all the agents together had great chemistry together, which really suited the piece a lot. Crazy times were had with them, especially with Sergio carrying the gun everywhere.
This was a fun read! It feels like it was a fairly long badfic, but you guys kept the pace going so that the mission didn't bog down. I also had no trouble keeping track of who was who, which canons had been replaced, etc. thanks to the mission feeling very character-driven, even on the part of the replacements. I also understood what was happening with the Nanohaverse magic, which is crucial, because I don't know that series.
It was a nice change of pace to see a crossover with Harry Potter without the Potter elements dominating the story. You reflected this in the mission well, too, letting Ari and Corolla handle the majority of the dangerous work using Nanohaverse powers.
The remains of Raging Heart are to be delivered to Grace Leon.
She's always out of spare parts.