Subject: Lisa and Veronica Interlude
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Posted on: 2012-04-27 15:59:00 UTC
Sorry, it isn't funny. Um. At all. Or maybe a bit. I don't know. I just had to deal with this gigantic, glaring mistake I Lisa made in my first mission. So. Um. Yeah.
http://flutterscribe.livejournal.com/1146.html
I really like how each agent drives the other up the wall. It's going to be very interesting watching these two on future missions. Don't feel bad about making mistakes: nobody's going to come around and chew you out for it. Besides, this piece was inspired by the aforementioned mistake and it turned out quite well. Let the plot bunnies pop up whenever they can!
On a side note, don't forget to add pages on the wiki for your characters and links to their missions!
I like the way you handled this, and as I said before, I really like the dialogue between your agents.
Looking forward to reading more of your stuff.
And thank you. It was nice to write an interlude, and I thought it was good for your characters. Top notch writing, too.
I hope you write another mission soon. I enjoy your agents' banter.
I did notice that it was way better than my mission (probably because I write better when I'm not nervous and stressed about said writing.) I'm glad you enjoyed it.