Previously, my permission piece caused a slight upset with a few people. This stemmed from my inexperience, so this time I plan on doing it right. I have recently re-edited my permission piece but I am looking for a few people who would be willing to read over it again for me.

I'm looking for someone who can see if not only the story is well written and help me fix it, but that the characterisation of some PPC characters are written properly. So, if you are interested I would appreciate it immensely :)