Subject: Looks good to me
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Posted on: 2012-01-25 14:18:00 UTC
While I can't say that I'm an expert on the Department of Intelligence, I didn't see any canon contradictions. Also, believe it or not, I didn't see a single spelling or grammar error.
Overall, it seems pretty good, although you'll probably want someone more familiar with the Department of Intelligence to go over it as well.
I really like this concept. I wonder if it will catch on...
Anyhoo, allow me to present my first PPC piece! Follow rookie spy Gaspard De Grasse on his first day in Intel and get a glimpse into the inner workings of DoI.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KNPRGbvDisq4cJ9KItT2Nc_QBHFRGMS6cyQMLu09iM4/edit
Be advised: it's ten and a half pages long.
Please check for consistency and SPaG: although I've re-read this until my eyes turned red, there's always this one thing that escapes my detection... Don't hesitate to leave a comment if some passages don't make sense or if you feel I'm adding too much description.
I'm really, really sorry that I put this up as an open beta. I had no idea this was frowned upon.
It has never come up this often before, so there was never really a reason to frown upon it. It was something that people did very rarely. We certainly never had it happen twice in such a short amount of time.
I, for one, would prefer if it didn't become a trend.
You couldn't have known, and we aren't going to send a gang to hunt you down. Don't worry about it, too much.
-Phobos
The people in the chatroom had been doing it for some time first; I've been noticing it for awhile with a lot of permission requests and some items from other people.
While I can't say that I'm an expert on the Department of Intelligence, I didn't see any canon contradictions. Also, believe it or not, I didn't see a single spelling or grammar error.
Overall, it seems pretty good, although you'll probably want someone more familiar with the Department of Intelligence to go over it as well.