Subject: Thank!
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Posted on: 2012-01-12 15:47:00 UTC
Heh, thank you for the review. it isn't too surprising that me and Miah missed a few things, we were eager to put this thing out after so very long.
I'm glad you liked the dialogue so much, that is one of the more enjoyable things to do with co-writes.
After Cadmar and Cali's first date, Miah interrogates Cadmar on her intentions during a mission in Stargate Atlantis.
Warnings: some mild bad language and innuendo
At long, long, looooooonnnnnngggg last. Here is the Sateda mission.
Sateda part I, part II
Thank you to our Beta readers: VM, Data_Junkie, Guvnor, and PoorCynic. Please note that Caddy and I claim any remaining mistakes. Our betas really went through a lot on this mission.
Adoptions:
There is a mini-Wraith named McKaLoy. Joe had expressed some interest in having this mini, but I haven't gotten confirmation, if Joe doesn't speak up, then McKaLoy will be up for adoption after the Interlude that will follow this mission. He is very, very much like his namesake.
There were two baby boys that have been adopted by Nurse Lillian in Medical. She is an NPC, and the babies will be also.
Finally, there are many partial Wraith fetuses being held in the Nursery hatching room, if anyone would like to adopt.
Good mission. The only thing is, my sister is named Teagan. So whenever I read the Sue's name, I get horrible, horrible mental images...But your writing was good!
Incidentally, if you bring a child back from a fic, your characters don't have to adopt it, right? I ask because there's two ten-year-old versions of Canon characters, and there's no way they can integrate--at least, one of them can't.
Thank you, and that is a strange coincidence! Your sister is probably a million times better then Sue!Teagan.
As for the child question, no, you do not have to adopt them. Like with Minis (or other oddities) you can easily just have them put into the Nursery/OFU/Adoption Center they would belong most in.
I was actually tempted to adopt one of the kids, but my agents aren't really cut out for parental duty (though them trying to raise a kid could be funny material Hmmmm...).
Well, she's as annoying as every other little sister out there, but no where near as bad as this Sue. The name is actually Welsh for 'beautiful'
Although, you know when a mispelling or somesuch will make, say, a Sue with her arms handcuffed behind her back have raise them over her head so that her hands are in front of her, which should logically dislocate her arms? My sister can do that--it's...weird to watch, to say the least.
In which a Sue burns in the sun, the agents have fun with each other, and crazy times are had all around.
I especially loved the back and forth between Miah and Cadmar in this mission, and how childlike it got. Reminds one that they're not so different as they claim, ya know? And the dialogue was really funny at several points.
There are a couple issues somewhere. I think you made a mini-Rono in Part 1, and there are a couple spelling issues you missed.
But otherwise, great mission!