Subject: I like! (Spoilers)
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Posted on: 2011-12-31 23:26:00 UTC
Particularly the console switching to Nyan cat. That would be hell. Very good job!
I did notice one typo:
Again, Nathan and Ellipsia growned in unison.
You meant groaned, of course.
In which Nathan and Ellipsia encounter a, well, different kind of urple prose.
Thanks for those who betaed for me. If I forgot you, tell me and I'll add you. Also, if you find any more errors, please tell me. They will be collected and updated.
Unfortunately, there's no loot, since the fic was deleted while the agents were waiting for it to come back online. So there's no loot this time.
I like that! :)
Always nice to see a mission that ends in a unique way and explores something new! Well done!
Particularly the console switching to Nyan cat. That would be hell. Very good job!
I did notice one typo:
Again, Nathan and Ellipsia growned in unison.
You meant groaned, of course.
That sounds like what would happen if someone thought it would be clever to intentionally do a really bad job of replicating the imagistic qualities of the poetry of Federico Garcia Lorca.
Fun mission all around, EF. Keep up the good work!
I really like the idea of an urple haze. Does it appear when ever the writing starts to get pretentious?