Subject: You lost me at "Sunflower/Man named Sunflower Official."
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Posted on: 2011-12-22 17:39:00 UTC

The Flowers are giant telepathic plants, no two ways about it. You're gonna want to brush up on the Original Series and the basics of the PPC in general before asking for permission, I think. Also, you can't actually claim that RC number until you have permission, so I'm afraid creating a journal named for it was a bit premature.

I recommend re-reading Nate's bio. There's a fair bit of wonky grammar and word choices—just in the Appearance section I find "complex" where you need "complexion" and "tied behind the his head," which has an extra word in it. Reading through it out loud might help, since it's hard to spot errors in things you wrote yourself.

Try to keep in mind that there's no rush here. We're not going to disappear, so taking your time to make sure everything is ship-shape can only benefit you.

~Neshomeh

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