Subject: Re: Mission
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Posted on: 2011-11-13 01:11:00 UTC
Nice. It's nice to read a bit of a "sequel" to an older mission, something we don't usually have the opportunity for. I liked seeing the agents get emotional over Time Lord!Hermione's actions, considering how thoughtless and far-reaching they were, even for a Sue.
Actually, the connection to Harry Potter is uncertain to say the least, but it is technically a crossover.
Also, I feel I should mention, that this is an atypical mission for my agents. Normally their job is to watch the action, note the charges and slay the Sue/Stu/whatever, not to stop the action from unfolding, because they can't bear it. They are not meant to be action heroes and they will be returning to normal.
And it's relatively short!
http://rc170.wordpress.com/2011/11/11/the-great-escape-aka-mission-one-point-five/
Souvernir: One Vortex Mnipulator.
No minis.
Nice. It's nice to read a bit of a "sequel" to an older mission, something we don't usually have the opportunity for. I liked seeing the agents get emotional over Time Lord!Hermione's actions, considering how thoughtless and far-reaching they were, even for a Sue.
I originally claimed this simply because it was a sequel, but I think it had enough for a mission in it's own right.
And yeah, I was pretty shocked, when I realised what was actually going on in the fic. It's one thing that this Sue doesn't know canon from a hole in the ground, but there's no excuse for knowing what a Meta Crisis is and not knowing what the consequences are.
I like it! I remember that Hermione-sue... ugh. I'm sorry you had to put up with that again.
And Steven... that was awful, what happened to him. Powerful story, though, and well-written on your part. Well done.
And the ending was sweet. The Nightmare Before Christmas is a wonderful angst-reducer.
All in all, a very cute mission :)
It ended up sadder than I had originally planned for, but anything less kind of felt like a cop-out. I'm really glad you liked it. ^^