Subject: Nice!
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Posted on: 2011-11-08 22:51:00 UTC
Even if I was a beta, I still wanted to read it over again. Sanctuary is fun to read about, and yeah, you did do a good job on making people who don't know the canon understand why the charges are bad.
This mission is set before the last Truth or Dare Interlude that Caddy and I published, so Cali and Cadmar are not dating yet. Otherwise, it is a bit on the NSFW side for some mild cursing and some crude terminology.
This is a fun one. Enjoy!
Bark at the Moon
Beta: Datajunkie, Caddy-shack, and Albatross
Mini-stenopelhabbilis up for adoption: Deckland and Kabal
OC up for adoption: Peyton (human male capable of teleporting)
New member of the Nursery staff available for NPC usage (or adoption if someone wants): Miss Carol Phillips (and her adopted son Marshall Foss Phillips)
Because I haven't commented yet. Very good job-this thing NEEDED to be sporked.
Jeez, I can't believe I haven't gotten to commenting on this yet!
Well, great job as always. I'm not as familiar with Sanctuary as you are, but I could see why this fic was so bad. So keep up the good work as usual! :D
Even if I was a beta, I still wanted to read it over again. Sanctuary is fun to read about, and yeah, you did do a good job on making people who don't know the canon understand why the charges are bad.
I think I've only ever heard about Sanctuary, because of your missions in the continuum, but you did a really good job making clear why the charges are bad, to people like me, who know jack about the canon.