Subject: New Mission! Stargate SG-1, DMS
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Posted on: 2011-11-03 03:39:00 UTC
Authors: Caddy-Shack and Guvnor of Space
Agents Orken and Thomas try to take on a blue wolf with quills... FROM SPACE! Agents Cadmar and Maria drop in to lend a hand
LINK: Click Here for mission!
Mini Unas:
O'Niell
O'Neil (I already own him!)
Thanks again to Aster and EF for betaing.
...and then I remembered that I already read that. :|
Anyways, I liked it. Poor Thomas and Orken. And O'Neil. He's so silleh.
Awesome! You guys did a great job of having your agents interact and work together. It was also Cool and Different to see some agents get pulled to the Glittery Side for a while, although it might have been even more fun if that had lasted longer, and some more repercussions had been seen.
Also, there's a spot when the agents enter the airport where a note to add something was left in. :)
Thank you for pointing out the note thing, I leave those lying around while making a mission. As you can see, they occasionally stick around. :P
Having agents do stuff is fun, especially when some have to be restrained and force fed medicine. :D
I'm glad you liked it. It's always fun to work with others on a mission, and this marks the second time Caddy and I have done a co-write. This time, though, he helped pull me out of the corner I had written myself into, (Orken and Thomas get hypnotized) which I am very thankful for. As for the length of time Thomas and Orken were hypnotized, well, I planned for it to be longer initially, but when I switched from "Somehow someone or something saves them" to "Caddy's agents save them" the time frame switched to the scene change.