Subject: Very impressive
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Posted on: 2011-10-24 15:20:00 UTC
I liked all the action stuff in the fic. It made the whole thing feel very real and very dangerous.
I also liked the description of the canon break.
Oh, and I found an error: "the lives of a majority of South Africa’s punctuation totally sucked" And may I say, what an adorable error that is. ^^
I won't have a use to put him to for a very long time. I can think of exactly the role he'd play, but it's far off in the planned future.
If someone else wants to claim him, feel free to override me.
You can totally have Johnathan. Just remember that somewhere along the line he'll need to get a last name and we'll be good.
I like it.
I liked all the action stuff in the fic. It made the whole thing feel very real and very dangerous.
I also liked the description of the canon break.
Oh, and I found an error: "the lives of a majority of South Africa’s punctuation totally sucked" And may I say, what an adorable error that is. ^^