Re: At long last, Forbiden Fruit: The Mission!

At long last, Forbiden Fruit: The Mission! by PitViperOfDoom on 2011-10-06 21:03:00 UTC Reply

I'm not gonna lie, this mission was kinda kicking my butt for a while, and as a result I'm running a bit behind on my storylines. But that's okay.

Mini-sparklewolves are up for adoption:
Ewdard Cullen
CAMPIRE
Mike nooton
La Plush
BELLAS
Ewadrd

La Plush is probably extra-fluffy. I may have missed a few, so I apologize in advance for that.

So, remember how I said that Caleb and Jack would be the last agents I was going to write? Yeah, I guess I sort of lied. The the plot bunnies bite, there really isn't much you can do about it.

Also? I've been wanting to use Kurozu-cho as an Assassination method for a while now.

Enjoy!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1gVHTt77YIr1EKfGe3qGuWtWrgulKNOv3p0SMKT4eBGw/edit?hl=en_US

Oh oh oh! by Jacer on 2011-10-07 15:25:00 UTC Reply

Can I have La Plush? Pretty please?

By all means! (nm) by PitViperOfDoom on 2011-10-07 18:17:00 UTC Reply

EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!! by Jacer on 2011-10-07 18:35:00 UTC Reply

*cuddles*

Fangirlish squealing like that... by JulyFlame on 2011-10-07 18:51:00 UTC Reply

...will end up getting you eaten by your mini. Keep a supply of bacon and fangirl blood around (and try to not act like a fangirl. That way leads to becoming dinner.).

Well, it's as much squealing... by Ja on 2011-10-07 18:59:00 UTC Reply

...about that fact that I've actually adopted a mini, as it is about the mini itself. *calms* Deep breaths, deep breaths...

AWESOME. by Laburnum on 2011-10-07 08:04:00 UTC Reply

I gotta include a scene somewhere where my guys hear about this fic ...
Re: At long last, Forbiden Fruit: The Mission! by Anonymous on 2011-10-07 03:18:00 UTC Reply

I thought it was 'tempation'. Did you misspell a misspelling?

Or correct it? Does it even count as a misspelling if you corrected a misspelling in the title?

I AM CONFUSED.

That's actually how I spelled it. by PitViperOfDoom on 2011-10-07 03:31:00 UTC Reply

Stupid MS Word AutoCorrect.
Forgot to log in again. by Duothimir on 2011-10-07 03:20:00 UTC Reply

Sorry about that.

Nice! by ShatteredSanity on 2011-10-07 03:14:00 UTC Reply

I really liked your mission. The fight scene was fun, I especially liked the bit where the agents barge in with an in character Edward Cullen.
Re: Mission (spoilers) by doctorlit on 2011-10-07 03:14:00 UTC Reply

This was an awesome mission! The badfic was hilariously bad and stupid, and it made for a great contrast with the end of the mission, when everything turned horribly dangerous for the agents. Excellent character development at the end, as well. I hope we still see Mordecai around in Postal a bit!
I suppose I'm not allowed to adopt minis pre-Permission... by Jacer on 2011-10-07 02:04:00 UTC Reply

:( Sparklewolves sound so adorable.

Also, Cave Johnson, we're done here. XD

You are. by Cassie Cameron-Young on 2011-10-07 08:26:00 UTC Reply

Permission is for being allowed to write for the PPC. You don't need that for a mini.

Eeeee! by Jacer on 2011-10-07 15:23:00 UTC Reply

Thank you for the clarification.

*Twitch* by OpinionedAngel on 2011-10-07 01:22:00 UTC Reply

I thought Twilight was bad enough, but THIS...

Though the thought of a naked Jacob makes me grin more than I should. Stupid sexy werewolf...

Re: *Twitch* by PitViperOfDoom on 2011-10-07 01:43:00 UTC Reply

Not if his naughty bits are compared to a "horrible wet mushroom." I like Taylor Lautner as much as the next fangirl, but there are some things I don't need to see.

Re: *Twitch*- Agreed (nm) by OpinionedAngel on 2011-10-07 01:59:00 UTC Reply

Re: At long last, Forbiden Fruit: The Mission! by Astral Void on 2011-10-06 22:24:00 UTC Reply

Oh. My. God. This was *awesome*. If you hadn't claimed it, I probably would have taken a shot at it myself, but you did a much better job than I could have. I have to admit, the Jacob!Stu/Kestrel fight did actually scare me a little, because the lack of description and off-hand reference to her in Medical made me think she was dead or irreparably maimed or something. But otherwise, yeah, fantastic mission.