Cool! by
Vixenmage
on 2011-09-24 03:49:00 UTC
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Very nice! It gives good background into Drew and Lucius'... uh, background? Well, their background together, at any rate. They're getting to be one of my favorite teams; I really like the contrast in style. Well done, Tray!
Quick edit... by
Tranum
on 2011-09-22 12:22:00 UTC
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So, uh, July was kind enough to offer to put a background on the pictures.
I added it on to the end of the story. In case anybody wants to see it.
Re: Click. by
doctorlit
on 2011-09-22 06:29:00 UTC
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I was surprised at how well this worked. When I was reading the explanation of the format in your author note, I was like, "Huh? Confused already." But in the story itself, the three portions flowed together very well. This is impressive, considering it's the kind of scene you would normally see in a visual medium, rather than written. So kudos on that!