During the process of formulating my introduction into the PPC HQ, I created two characters from a Mythos scenario to place in my Crew (as in the Star Destroyer thing).

After paring my plans down considerably, these two characters, Joseph Clayton and Marie Trinh, found their way into a story which will feature the Tcho-Tcho (or rather, the three disparate cultures which are labeled as such), Devonian frog-men, Delta Green, Nyarlathotep, other Great Old Ones and the hypothesis that there is more than one way of going insane.

I need a little feedback, some criticism and some insight on what the line would be between deconstructing and reconstructing the horror of the Mythos (for example, the knowledge isn't scary so much as are the cults (or rogue DG cells) coming after you, or the psionic feedback from the Old Ones themselves.)

And here it is.

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7387861/1/MemoriesofLeng