Subject: Nice.
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Posted on: 2011-09-16 03:07:00 UTC
I'm no PG, but you've got a lot of humor in there, and it all works really well.
Also, for some reason I think Noir would be suitable for a Nippon Ichi canon. And hey, there's La Pucelle, where all the characters have French-sounding names, so it works out for everyone.
I think you'll do just fine with missions. :D
Greetings, fellow Boarders!
Since I've been around for, lessee, over two months now, I figured now would be the best time to actually ask for Permission.
(... Also I have only managed to finish my sample today, but eh, details! *derps*)
Anyhow, here goes nothing:
Agent biographies: Abelardo "Ardo" Nevrakis and Noir (Department of Floaters)
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1ava33yov0bSC125jfSQ9tiM7xQ7hjAnHBTXlwbMZwWo/edit?hl=enUS
The Permission sample itself:
<a href="https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yn-jcxoIN-FhozMSQSmFgaCCibB2Bz0vaugmy576cZE/edit?hl=enUS">https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yn-jcxoIN-FhozMSQSmFgaCCibB2Bz0vaugmy576cZE/edit?hl=en_US
Hope you enjoy, and I'm looking forward to hearing good news! *salutes*
I always love the "happy, hyper, naive newbie" and "cynical, dark, serious dude" pair - so much opportunity for hilarity to ensue. Can't wait to read their missions!
That was amusing. This is what I got from there personalities:
Noir: "I am a serious and suspicious ninja-dude."
Ardo: "WHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!1!!11!" *bounce bounce flail bounce*
*gigglesnort*
My favorite line was the last one. "And there they went." Hee!
I like it. Short, simple, to the point, and funny. Go forth and PPC, young arthropod!
~Neshomeh
*proceeds to flail her arms around like Kermit the Frog*
Yaaaaaay! This makes me so incredibly happy and I don't even know where to start thanking you. This just made my day.
I will do my best not to disappoint. *salutes again, then returns to flailing like an imbecile*
Congratulations! I cant wait to see your first mission!
I'm no PG, but you've got a lot of humor in there, and it all works really well.
Also, for some reason I think Noir would be suitable for a Nippon Ichi canon. And hey, there's La Pucelle, where all the characters have French-sounding names, so it works out for everyone.
I think you'll do just fine with missions. :D