Subject: And I just walked in... (badfic)
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Posted on: 2011-09-13 22:49:00 UTC
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7264130/2/OrientalTransienceofScarletWaning_Moon
Touhou, rated T, contains atrocious errors in English and Japanese language syntax, and sex scenes in the form of "and then they had sex", between characters who may or may not be underage. It may be the work of a troll.
There's also an very obvious sue named "Marilyn[e?] Satangod". In a world based on Japanese legend. She is also the strongest person in the universe and has "the most powerful fire magic ever and it can pburn everything[sic]". There are a huge amount of character derailment, with just about every character suddenly loving every other character they meet, and every character has somehow developed "big boobies" despite many of them being flat chested in canon. There are several inconsistencies, sometimes even in the same sentence, such as how "sakutya[sic, sakuya]" is wearing "a blood red dress that was died with real blood and she was nsaked except for a bloody apron and she also had on socks that had black and red stripes and she lookined like she was from hot topic[sic]". The author also attempts to use "kawaii" as a verb.
Normally, I would just laugh at a poorly written fanfic from this continuum because of odd circumstances involving the continuum, but this one is just too awful to be funny.