Thanks for all the help, everyone. I think I know what to do now. *hugs*

I left a review on it about two years ago. It looks like he actually made some of the changes I suggested, too.

Still doesn't fix the canon-breakiness, unfortunately. Nobody in their right mind would give fire-lizard eggs to candidates/new weyrlings. {X P

Regarding the non-canon Weyrs, as Cassie says, it just depends on what works best for your mission. Two of them don't really make an appearance, so I'd personally be comfortable just letting the canon annihilate them as it snaps back, but the one the story is set in may need more extensive action (read: burning).

As for the OC, if you're talking about "Lisa," I'd let it slide in this case. I think he just missed correcting it to Lesa, or forgot. If he'd done it more than once, it would still be fair game in my book, but just once is an honest mistake that anyone could make.

To reiterate, though, it's your mission, so do whatever works best/is funniest. {= )

~Neshomeh

1. While I don't know the canon that well, it sounds to me like you're dealing with geographical aberrations - geography that doesn't exist in canon. If you were to ask for the advice of the Department of Geographical Aberrations, they would generally say to burn or explode the Weyrs. (There is a reason they're also known as the Pyros. :P) They are very large, Weyrs, aren't they? Like mountains?
   
   If you'd rather take a more peaceful approach, the Weyrs should disappear once the world-warping Sue/Stu is out of the picture. Though if the Weyrs are defined enough by the words, instead of being just vague "these are Weyrs, now let's get to the action!", they may not melt away so easily and you might have to resort to the first approach mentioned above. It's up to you how hard these things are to eliminate and how you go about it, but the two main choices are what I mentioned.
   
   2. Again, this one is your choice. Either nothing can happen, or you can get a mini-OC, or you can get what looks like a mini of the canon except it's pink and sparkly. Or you can invent your own description.
   
   
   Really, writing for the PPC is about choice; there's no "correct" way to deal with things, just approaches that have been tried before, found effective and used again. People are always coming up with new ideas. Given the Agents have such a heavy workload and equipment that's very prone to malfunctioning, things are often made up on the fly out of necessity.