Subject: Re: Mission 4
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Posted on: 2011-08-26 08:24:00 UTC
I know I say this about all your missions, but I like this one. You've done a really great job with your characters, Kirill especially. Cy is fun, I can't wait to see more of him. Great job.
I realize this is a bit unexpected, but here's mission 4. It was a cakewalk to write, and only as long as it is because I used the space to introduce a new character.
Part 1: http://gaikokujinguy.livejournal.com/4316.html
Part 2: http://gaikokujinguy.livejournal.com/4606.html
Lewt:
One (1) mind sculpture
One (1) cannon
One (1) pair of mage underwear
One (1) crocked smile
Anyways, I'm glad this fic is killed... what exactly does the mage underwear do?
My favourite parts were the remark about the scene being like if David Lynch and Neil Gaiman wrote a sex-scene together, and the one about a stormtrooper trying to hit a named protagonist. I think the last one could make future missions ... interesting.
I know I say this about all your missions, but I like this one. You've done a really great job with your characters, Kirill especially. Cy is fun, I can't wait to see more of him. Great job.
I think it goes without saying at this point, but I just love how Kirill and Zug go around doing stuff. And now with Cy thrown into the mix, that's gong to make things interesting.
Shame you're not going to go in with the triple act, though. But hey, what can I do?
Fun times are had. Great mission!