Subject: Re: Interlude 4: Exchange
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Posted on: 2011-08-23 01:39:00 UTC
Is it just me, or are you missing a couple of commas right at the end, in the dialogue?
Otherwise, good show old chap... except that I know nothing about your fandom.
A new host is found for Nut, and Orken is finally alone in his head again.
Link!
So after months of not writing anything (not by choice, of course!), I've written something.
You've reminded me why I like reading about Orken so much. I look forward to you're next mission, and I hope to see more of Agent Orken/Miss DeMarr (and Nut). Hopefully you'll see this before it completely falls off the first page.
Though I wish we'd be able to do that interlude together that we'd talked about. *shrugs*
That would have been ideal, yes, but I wanted to get this done as soon as possible so I could start doing missions again.
I'm sure we'll get around to doing something eventually.
Is it just me, or are you missing a couple of commas right at the end, in the dialogue?
Otherwise, good show old chap... except that I know nothing about your fandom.