Subject: Uuuh, a mini-agent!
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Posted on: 2011-08-15 17:51:00 UTC
*collects Kiril*
MINE!
Also, I like it. I already told you so this is redundant, but I really like it.
Subject: Uuuh, a mini-agent!
Author:
Posted on: 2011-08-15 17:51:00 UTC
*collects Kiril*
MINE!
Also, I like it. I already told you so this is redundant, but I really like it.
Well, here it is: mission 2. The fic was http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2195776/1/bAbbeybthebJedib, which I didn't totally hate for reasons I explain on the LJ.
Part 1: http://gaikokujinguy.livejournal.com/1361.html
Part 2: http://gaikokujinguy.livejournal.com/1730.html
Part 3: http://gaikokujinguy.livejournal.com/1926.html
Part 4: http://gaikokujinguy.livejournal.com/2269.html
Lewt:
One (1) lightsaber (green)
One (1) sarong (apricot)
One (1) Key
One (1) Imperial Stormtrooper and kit [REDACTED -Marquis de Sod]
“Damnit, I was hoping we'd have porn.”
“A person tied to a chair makes you think of porn?” Zug said.
“Linoleum makes me think of porn.”
Oh, I like Kirill. This was a great mission, really good.
This was a fun read! Good work keeping track of all the various timey-wimey details. I like that you go out of your way to point out what's good about the story—something I think we should all get in the habit of doing more often.
I'm glad you could make a mission out of this, ti was funny. Your agents are hilarious too. Such a silly, silly fic. I can;t really say what my favorite part is, there was a lot of funny moments.
Oh, and I found a couple words repeated ' Two hours later, on Dathomir, the witches of the Singing Mountain clan were tending to tending to their wounded sister. '
Can't wait for more!
Oh, God. You're quickly turning into one of my favorite writers with the PPC right now. It's just... That was too funny. Again, Kiril and Zug play off each other extremely well, and it was just a hilarious mission.
I did get kinda confused with the whole time travel aspect, though. That probably could've been explained a bit better.
But still, fun times are had. And ooh, the Marquis de Sod gets involved. I wonder how THAT'S going to end... ;)
*collects Kiril*
MINE!
Also, I like it. I already told you so this is redundant, but I really like it.
is bloody hard to write, but it was the only way I could think of to make the fic entertaining. Like I said in the notes, I don't think it was irredeemable, or even completely terrible, just incompetently done, so I needed the extra gimmick to play with.
One thread I tried to use to help keep the time thing sane is Kirill's belt.