I wrote a short thing on a whim tonight, and the only feedback I have gotten so far is from a friend I don't particularly trust when it comes to these matters (she seems to delight in making up things I've done wrong). Of course, just because I don't trust her doesn't mean she IS wrong, so I'm hoping I could get some feedback from writers I trust, a.k.a. all of you guys.

The story is called A Good Day. It's a Lord of the Ring fic.

Here is a link: http://www.fanfiction.net/s/7249749/1/AGoodDay