Subject: Fun mission!
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Posted on: 2011-08-02 22:12:00 UTC
I mean, wow, was that fic bad. This is why those elements don't work at all. And the butchering of the English Language... I swear, I had to read that paragraph where she talked about the Archdemon being the same thing twice because it was incomprehensible the first time.
Also, really obvious Sue. And I don't think she knows what a Fade Walker actually is. *points at Feynriel*
Great mission!
First an interlude, in which we see that my agents haven't been keeping up on the latest events in HQ. This was originally planned as an intro to the mission where they use the fictionary, but I don't know when I'll actually get around to get it written, so I thought I'd better write it as an interlude, before the joke gets even older. The fictionary is the brainchild of Tungsten Monk, who has kindly allowed me to use it in ... certain missions.
http://eileen-alphabet.livejournal.com/16763.html
And then the mission itself, in which the agents are really warming up to the longest-charge-list Winter Olympics. Cimarron, the soal, is the brainchild of Pieguy.
Rated M, NSFW and might be considered NSFB depending on how great your love of the English language is.
http://eileen-alphabet.livejournal.com/17531.html
And link to second part, because LJ thought it was too long for one post.
http://eileen-alphabet.livejournal.com/17726.html
Mini-Darkspawn rescued: Gray, Sir Jory, Hightever, Crow, Gregoir, gunlock, Anitivian, Antivian's, Zav, Lylium, Antivain, and Riorden.
Oh, and Jane, the mini-Aragog and Galliefrey and Toclafaine, the mini-Reapers are still hanging out in RC #170. The agents are not trying to steal them, they just don't know where they belong and are still waiting to hear from the owners or someone who knows them.
"My name is Zevran, Zev to my friends, I'm one of the Crow." he said, and Leilana gasped.
I edited it in. They were in the scene to grab a mini anyway, so I may as well make it two.
Other than that, awesome mission, and I'm glad to see Comarron again. That little scamp.
Oh dear. Mini-Cimarron. Someone get that please.
I mean, wow, was that fic bad. This is why those elements don't work at all. And the butchering of the English Language... I swear, I had to read that paragraph where she talked about the Archdemon being the same thing twice because it was incomprehensible the first time.
Also, really obvious Sue. And I don't think she knows what a Fade Walker actually is. *points at Feynriel*
Great mission!
Yes, it had to die, and quickly.
I don't quote from where she tells Wynne the story about the Great Goddess and all that, but that was so confusing that even though I wrote that the youngest child was the ancestor of Vera, I'm not absolutely sure that I got that right. It might have been the oldest child. Or even the one in the middle. And an possible sex change brought on by pronoun confusing didn't help either. Gah, this fic was stupid!
Forgot to mention them. The mission is heavy with spoilers for the Dragon Age: Origins game.