Subject: I liked
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Posted on: 2011-08-02 18:00:00 UTC
the mission. It was easy to follow despite not knowing the canon (with the sole exception of the word "Gobbler," which can easily be interpreted from the context as a Bad Thing.) Not terribly funny, but it would've clashed with the tone.
Good work.
Title: The Other Child
Summary: Ian and Lee take on a Mary Sue who has insinuated her way into the story of The Golden Compass, and a few things are brought to light.
Notes: Spoiler-riffic for The Golden Compass, so if you haven't read the book, you may not get everything. Still, enjoy!
I also loved the dæmons and that your agents got to keep them. So cute! And the soul baring (bad pun intended) talks were funny.
It was a very enjoyable read. Nicely done.
the mission. It was easy to follow despite not knowing the canon (with the sole exception of the word "Gobbler," which can easily be interpreted from the context as a Bad Thing.) Not terribly funny, but it would've clashed with the tone.
Good work.
I really enjoyed the mission. And so, we finally know Lee's true name.
No doubt she changed it, is really, really long.
She also had a bit of a falling-out with her family, so she wanted to distance herself from them as much as possible, among other things.
Wow, that was a really good mission. I love the daemons, they were really good. And that Sue... ugh.
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